Limerick : Roadside Journey !

#MiracleChallenge : Week – 9 )

Challenge No :4 
Write a Story/ Poem using Prompt Theme –

Hello Everyone !

How are you all today ?

I have become a lazy blogger this week, concentrating on personal work. Today, I have tried to write a threaded limerick for the first time.

Limerick – a five-line witty poem with a distinctive rhythm. The first, second and fifth lines, the longer lines, rhyme. The third and fourth shorter lines rhyme. (A-A-B-B-A).

 So, this is my 3rd #MiracleChallenge entry for this week. Hope you like it.


Talks of Four friends with enthusiasm and fun take heed.

Three said Train, One said Road; majority agreed.

Road journey began

With a new game plan.

One of them grinned and asked, “Who need Speed ?”

All raised both hands, including his with evilness.

The journey without speed is meaningless.

For a moment

Their eyes got stolen.

Eye balls Reaching to roadside beauty, like an adhesiveness.

White skin, Wavy hair, Green eyes

Sleeveless and dress so short lengthwise.

Car slowed to rest

Heads turned to left.

Long toned legs and simple makeup; giving guys a surprise highs.

“Hey Babe. How may I help you ?”, asked one.

“Where you want to go, madam?”, asked none.

She stepped forward

But her mind wandered.

Like a drug, all four begged her welcome; for some fun.

“Please drop me on the way.”, she replied in worry.

Looking at her watch, she agreed to join with a hurry.

Hospital not so far

Quick, on this racing car.

Thoughts ran about a seriously ill patient with eyes blurry.

Sunset was nearing, with raising eyebrows, inside devils return

All four looked at each other asking whose first turn

“My dad..”

She said looking sad.

“At hospital, very critical.” Her words caused all a deep concern.

Devil vanished, humanity took birth with responsibility.

“We are here to help you. Don’t worry”, affirmed all in gentility.

She sighed.

Her eyes dried.

She laughed secretly that her mind trick worked at upcoming vulnerability.



Thank you for reading. Your comments are most appreciable:mrgreen:

For more details about #MiracleChallenge, kindly visit “#MiracleChallenge Week – 9” dated 9th -15th August, 2016 – in my blog.

Yes ! Every Tuesday, I post new Writing Prompts for Miracle Challenge, which is a weekly writing challenge to write Story/ Tiny Tale / Poem / Haiku . So check out the Writing prompts on the above link and participate.

The deadline for Week – 9 is 15th August, 2016.

To read the submission’s of other participants, Click Here.

Never forget to have fun and inspire others to write:)

Happy Blogging !

Happy Weekend !






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