The ravishing smell 

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Poem Title : The Ravishing Smell

Challenge No : 2

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​Flying through a field full of petals

I’ve been following this one scent.

It’s been days

And I’ve been through the field so many times

But I won’t give up, my antennas don’t lie

The others may laugh as much as they want

But I know that this odor is real.

A subtle musk, an enchanting smell

The flower it emanates from must be a wonder

I’m drooling at the idea of the delicious nectar awaiting

My members won’t stop fidgeting

My wings flap nervously

At this point, I’m barely flying, more like planning.

I’m anticipating my reward and it takes over me.

Finally, I find it.

A small flower with round pink orangey petals

I feel like every hair of my black and yellow fur is dancing

The other bees at the hive said I was too young, too inexperienced

That an exquisite perfume isn’t to be trusted


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