Mistaken Conclusion.. !

#MiracleChallenge : Week -7
(https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/07/26/miraclechallenge-week-7-dated-26th-july-1st-august-2016/ )

Challenge No : 3
Write a Short Story using below three prompt words-

Hello Everyone !

Sorry for not posting anything yesterday. There was net connection problems due to poor Weather conditions and Power cuts.

So, today, I wrote all the pending works and Re-Blogs of Submissions for you all to read.

Now, I have written a short story. This is my 2nd #MiracleChallenge entry for this week.


Molly and Denver are known in the entire building for their live in relationship, romance and love between them. 

But, today. She left his home packing her bags.


He didn’t even stop her. Neither she had a second thought about staying and solving the situation. Both were stubborn with their own decisions. It was a couple of hours back; everything turned upside down. 


******* 2 HOURS BACK *******

“May be it’s time to end our live-in relationship.” Denver retaliated back to her when Molly enquired about some new girl in his office.

“What do you mean ? So. You are going to leave me. Right? I knew that this is going to happen. I’m such a fool to realize this very later.” Said Molly angrily at the same shedding her tears.

Denver was calm and kept listening to her words, while smiling secretly deep inside.

“What wrong did I do to you? Why did you cheat on me ?  I’m not your keeper. You womanizer. Go to hell.”, she yelled at him angrily.


Losing his temper, Denver slapped her when she pointed him as a womanizer.

The slap was tight enough to make her fall on the floor. She kept her palm on her left side of face and turned her face towards him. With her red bloodshot eyes, narrowing them in pain; she breathed, “Thanks.”

Realizing his mistake; he asked for forgiveness. But Molly with a heavy breath showcased her anger towards him being in the same position.

“Okay fine. Forget it. Do whatever you want to. Say what you want to. And I must thank you today. I got to know what you had thought about me till now.

So, You never believed me even being with me for 2 years. That girl is our common friend John’s step sister, who joined my team recently. And she have my sister’s name. Obviously, I have every chance to take care of her like my little sister.”

He continued by caressing his forehead that, “Molly. I wanted to marry you and hence I thought of putting an end to our live-in relationship. But, now I don’t think this will work. I don’t see our future right now.”

Saying Denver turned back to look at Molly. But, Molly was not there. Infact, She didn’t listen to any of his words, she had left that place before he started putting forward his point of views.

Molly returned back from their bedroom packing her bags and left his home without uttering a single word.

And Denver stood there watching her go.


I have written this story, because I feel most of the times Relationships die due to lack of love and unnecessary doubts that come in between; leading to arguments and breakups, distance or divorce.

Thank you for reading. Your comments are always welcome 😀

For more details about #MiracleChallenge, kindly visit “MiracleChallenge Week – 7” dated 26th July-1st August, 2016 – https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/07/26/miraclechallenge-week-7-dated-26th-july-1st-august-2016/ in my blog.

Yes ! Every Tuesday, I post new Writing Prompts for Miracle Challenge, which is a weekly writing

challenge to write Story/ Tiny Tale / Poem / Haiku . So check out the Writing prompts on the above link and participate.

The deadline for Week – 7 is 1st August, 2016.

To read participant’s submissions for Miracle Challenges, Click Here.

Never forget to have fun and inspire others to write 🙂

Happy Blogging !



Miracle 🙂


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