Their Love Story.. !

#MiracleChallenge : Week – 5

Challenge No : 3
Write a short Story using below three prompt words-

Hello Everyone !

How is your weekend going on?

Today, I’m going to write a short story. This is my 4th #MiracleChallenge entry for this week. Hope you all enjoy it. 


It was a beautiful night of old yet most romantic couple’s 50th Wedding Anniversary. They both shared their most beautiful moments; happened in their last 50 years, with well wishers, friends and young couples, who had gathered at their house to wish them with gifts.

Next day morning, preparing his favourite Coffee, she went to wake him up with morning wishes. Looking at her husband in deep sleep, she smiled and said “Hey ! Sweetheart. Good morning. Here is your super hot coffee.” And, left his room for the daily household chores; by leaving the mug on the table, beside his bed.

She watered the plants in her little heavenly garden and after plucking the flowers for her prayer, she came back to his room to take back the empty coffee mug. 

“Oh Honey ! You are not awake till now. Get up. Your Coffee is getting cold. And look at the time. It’s already 8.00 AM now. Time for your daily walk.”

When there was no response from her husband, with fear, she went closer and by taking his hand, she checked his pulse. Hearing to the heartbeat, with a relief, she said ” Oh dear ! Nothing happened. There is nothing to worry. I’m here with you. I won’t allow anything happen to you. Just stay with me.”

She walked to the next room in panic to call the ambulance from her landline number.

“Hello. It’s emergency. Could you please send the Ambulance immediately. My husband is lying unconscious on the bed.”

She thanked the person on the call, who asked her not to panic and affirmed that they are on the way. She went back to his room and sat near him. Holding his hands, she spoke to him.“They are on the way. They will come here anytime soon. Don’t worry.” 

Listening to the siren, she went outside and requested the hospital staffs, “We need to rush immediately to the Hospital. Come this way. He is inside.”  The staffs calmed her down first, and asked her to wait inside the ambulance; since she was an old woman in her late 60’s and carefully brought her husband inside the ambulance. And then, all went straight to the hospital.

Checking her husband, doctors arranged for an operation immediately; stating abnormal function of heart. Sitting outside the Operation Theatre, she kept praying for her husband.

She always knew that his condition was worsening these days. But, she never thought she will have to see this day right after their anniversary. Visitors started arriving, hearing to the news. After 2 hours of Operation, Doctor came out and said, ” Your husband is out of Danger now. He is doing fine now. You can see him, once he comes to conscious state.”

Hearing to that, her tear rolled down her cheeks and she thanked her God for being so kind.

After an hour, her husband gaining consciousness, asked the nurse to call his wife.

Looking at her dear wife, he smiled in little pain and in lower voice; he uttered, “Darling. I’m back.” She didn’t respond. Looking at her sad face, he continued, “What happened dear? What are you thinking?”

She couldn’t control her pain inside, which was ruining her soul for past few hours. Listening to her husband’s voice, she started crying and asked for a promise. Wiping her tears, he promised without even asking about the promise. “I promise. I will never leave you alone again.” And gave his beautiful wife, a forehead kiss.



Thank you for reading my story. I have written about a life of an old couple who are madly in love with each other, inspired by the above image.

I hope I didn’t hurt anyone. Your comments are most appreciable 🙂

For more details about #MiracleChallenge, kindly visit “MiracleChallenge Week – 5” dated 12th July, 2016 –  in my blog.

Yes ! Every Tuesday, I post new Writing Prompts for Miracle Challenge, which is a weekly writing challenge to write Story/ Tiny Tale / Poem / Haiku . So check out the Writing prompts on the above link and participate.

The deadline for week -5 is 18th July, 2016.

Never forget to have fun and inspire others to write 😀

Happy Blogging !



Miracle 🙂


Image Source : LifeHacks

4 thoughts on “Their Love Story.. !

    1. Ha ha. They are a romantic + example of true love couple 💘

      I’m glad you felt the suspense and made you worry about the charater.
      Thank you for stopping by my blog and reading each and every entry from my side. You just made my day with your beautiful and valuable comments 😇

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